Hey guys! Here are the final revisions of the boards.
1) Bieber getting swallowed.
the last panel is kinda iffy. Let me know if you guys find something not fitting so i can fix them over break? :)
2) Mr. Wong getting swallowed after getting bitch-slapped from the nacho cheese monster.
Version uno: straight-forward shot
Version two: more shots and more dynamic angles (you know i love dynamic angles!)
3) Monster smirking at Sampson and Katherine / Catherine
Version One: Straight-forward smirk
Version Dos: more angles! :D
and it ends liek this:
and then the blank page :)
So here's my revision, what do you guys think?
Have a fabulous spring break btw you two! (and whoever is reading this blog)
Peace!
1.) These look good. I love the pose in the last panel, bwahahaha.
ReplyDelete2.) I like the first version because it's very clear. I also had an idea: what if we showed the manager fighting back or struggling a bit with the monster after it chomps down on him, so we're not really sure what happens to him (Does he get eaten? Does he get away?) I don't know if I'm making sense but...let me know what you think. XD
3.) I really like the smirk in the second version. Does the monster get bigger after he gets shot with the cheese spray? I can't remember. >.>
Anyway...good job~ :D (And thanks for getting these done so quickly.)
I see you've significantly reduced the girl's boob size since your first post!! hahaha!
ReplyDeleteI'll go work on the boards! (cuz your suggestions make more sense) And yes, the monster grows bigger and then swallow S + C lol
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