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Monster Foooood

Here's some ideas for the mutant food scenes:


Donuts:

Vague chicken product:

Changes so far - escape attempt #1!

Part two revised?

Here are some revision of the previous post without any new panels

1) LI "Scoffs... This machine is like broken" or "I need maintenance"
2) MC "I.. I can help you with that!"

 1) MC [Ok, time to prove to Katherine that I'm awesome!]

2) MC "Ah!

     LI" ...."

1) W "Yo dude"

2) W "I want to get a refund for this twinkie, because it tried to attack me..."

1) MC "Ok ok ok, here's your...

2) MC "...money back!"

    W "Thank you very much sir!"

2) JB "Baby baby baby OWWW!" (or "AAH")

 1) MC "I wonder what is ll that ruckus behind us..."

 MC "AAAAHHH!!! The foods alive!!!!"

1) LI "Watch out behind you!"

1) MC "AHA! Fear me, monster!"

2) LI "Here.. Help me out next time!"

    MC "Oh okay..."

{(I was thinking of inserting the extra food transforming into mutant scenes here))

1) MG " Where did all of these cheese come from?"

2) MG *mumbles* "Stupid cheese. Stupid Sampson. He should clean this up instead of me..."

1) MG "Too much cheese oozing out! Get back in there!"

1) MC "Omg, omg omg! We're gonna die! We're dead meat! We're...!" *notices cheese spray bottles*

2) MC  "Prepare to meet your doom, monster!"

1) LI "Lame!"

     MC + Monster "..."

Part two baby

Hey guys! This is my contribution the the story! There will be corrections, here are just the roughs!

Here's some of the acronym: 

LI - Love Interest AKA Catherine

MC - Main Character AKA Sampson

MG - Manager AKA Mr. Wong

M - Monster

 1) LI "Scoffs... This machine is like broken." Or "I need help!"
2) MC "I.. I can help you with that!"

1) MC *Ok, time to prove to Catherine that I am awesome!*

2) MC "Ah!"

     LI" ...

 2) W "Yo dude"  (J speaking here. I will have to edit this part later because I didn't know the guy's name. So this is his pseudo impersonation)

 1) W "I want to get a refund for this twinkie, because it tried to attack me..."

 2) MG "Ok ok, here's your..."

1) MC "... money back"

    W "Thank you very much sir!"

 2) JB (Yes, this is Justin Bieber) "Hmmm.. what should I get..."

 JB "baby baby baby OW"

1) MC "I wonder what's all that ruckus behind us..."

1) MC "AAAHHHH!!! THE FOODS ALIVEEEE!!!!!"

1) LI [points behind MC] "Behind you!"

1) MC "AHA! Fear me, you monster!"

1) LI "Stupid!"

2) LI "Here... Help me out next time!"

    MC "Oh ok..."

1) MG "Where did all of these cheese come from?"

2) MG [mumbles] "Stupid cheese. Stupid Sampson... He should be cleaning up this mess instead of me.."

1) MG "TOo much cheese is oozing out! Grr! Get back in there!"

1) MC "Omg, omg ,omg! We're gonna die! We're dead meat! We're...!!" [notices the cheese spray bottle]

2) MC "Prepare to meet your doom, monster!"

1) LI "LAME!"

    MC + M"..."

1) M "RAWR"

2) MC screams and LI looked worried

[ominous music playing in the bg]

Anyways, hope it's acceptable so far! Peace!